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-You Don't Know Her-You hear the bell ring, gather your things and push into the crowded halls on your way to fourth period. You pause to say hey to a guy on your football team: you exchange high-fives and good-luck's for today's after-school game before saying goodbye and continuing on. Several yards off, she's standing in the doorway of her class: you don't see her. You almost never do, and sometimes she prefers it this way. You don't know that she's loved you since freshmen year. How could you? You've only spoken to her once, and she had been blushing furiously the entire time, glancing at her

Blue-Jay"I don't think I can do it anymore."
The girl says this.  She is sitting on an old wooden bench under an even older apple blossom tree.  Sunlight falls in stencils of gold across her face and arms.
"I know it's hard."
This is said by the boy.  He is sitting beside her, his blue eyes glinting in the dappled light.  "It's hard but you have to."
The girl stares down at her hands.  "I'm sick of the apologies."
"What do you mean?"
"The others.  They apologize to me.  Even my teachers do it!  Why are they apologizing?  Do they think it will make me

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Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

©2011-2013 *Peibee-an-Jay

Sorry for giving you a song repeat, but you have to listen to this while you read this.

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Dedicated to all those who have lost someone.

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~MadCamera Oct 20, 2011

Why do you try so hard to make me cry

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*Peibee-an-Jay Oct 20, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

d'aww

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~Snapoclap Sep 13, 2011

It won't show up for me. D:

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~KiraKiraBubble Sep 5, 2011

Oh goodness. I love this ;___;

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~ScubaSteve13 Sep 5, 2011 Student Traditional Artist

I wanna cry! I love this poem!

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~cookiemonster2011 Sep 5, 2011

i actually cried alittle

tjis is soo pretty and sooo sad.

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~sMARIEs123 Sep 5, 2011

I. Loved. It. Period. I don't know weather I should shout something or cry silently.

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~power365 Sep 5, 2011 Student General Artist

THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mood: Anguish

~teambookwormm Sep 5, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

As I lost someone I cared about this summer (my grandma, to cancer), this hits close to home for me.
You did a really wonderful job with this, very sad and very well written.

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~Kiwi-chan01 Sep 5, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

_{How sweet~}

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